Title: Walking dead ghost
On a cold dark drippy night I was walking like a normal person but everyone was running away from me. I was confused, what they were running from. Shocking myself I was hit by a car and I screamed like a little girl getting a pony. It was horrendous. The familiar van went through me.
“ OMG!!”
It’s the Ghost Busters. In my dead head and in my blood dripping brain I was thinking who called the evil ghost collectors?
“It’s time to suck up some ghosts.”
It took them about 10 minutes to fully suck me up. This day on I’ve been stuck in another dimension that is called New Zealand.
Hey Leighton,
ReplyDeleteIt's me Marcus, your buddy. Very interesting I would have done something different but that does not make bad, it's great! By the way I will not be posting, sorry. Where were you when you were alive?
From Marcus
Hey Leighton,
ReplyDeleteSorry about commenting again. I wanted to say I will do 100WC.
Marcus
It's all right bro no harm done:)
DeleteAre you writing as a ghost? I didn't think of doing that! Nice work. What are the colours for?
ReplyDeleteMr. M. (Team 100WC)
Bedfordshire, UK
Hello Mr Murphy
DeleteI am happy that you like my story. The colours are my goals my goals were to use 7 wow words and the green and red are my other goal it was to start 1 sentence with a ing ending and that's why I highlighted those words. I am very sorry I forgot to post my goals:(
Hi Leighton,
ReplyDeleteI like your post because it was a little bit of a mystery and I like those. I also like your post because you talked about the Ghostbusters and that is very cool. Another thing that I like about your post is that you talked about New Zealand like it is a dimension.
I think that it is cool that you can make a story that interesting out of just a picture. I also think that is is also cool how you used a lot of wow words and that makes your post very interesting.
I also like to use a lot of wow words and that makes my post more interesting because more people will want to comment on it. More people will want to comment on it because they will be drawn in by the wow words.
Do you like using wow words?
Alice
Here is a link to my blog
Hi Alice
ReplyDeleteThanks for the outstanding comment. I all so like using wow words Because it makes my story more interesting so that more and more people will comment on to my post. I am happy that you like my post but your post are better.
Yes I like using wow words.